Wednesday, September 19, 2012

Hi there classmates,

     I am glad to be part of this class. I am a freshman and trying to get back in the swing of things. I am a author of a poetry book published 2010. I love to write poetry and short stories.  I am a mother of 2 adult sons and have 4 grandchildren.  Coming back to college after 35 years is very scary but I am slowly learning new things. I realize I am not as smart as I thought i was.  Remember to always Stand tall Stand strong through any storm. if the Storm knocks you down than get back up and start all over again. I am looking forward to getting to know you all better.
Rhonda aka Rho

    My 2 favorite sections are in the reading of Shrouded in Contradiction. I felt these two passages really tell us (the reader) her inner most feelings.

     "I want to argue. I feel like a child.Defiant. but powerless. Burning with injustice, but also with a hint of shame.  I do as i am told, feeling acutely conscious of the bare skin I am covering."

     All  know is such moments of passionate abandon, within the circle  of invisibility created by the veil. offer an emotional catharsis every bit as potent as any sexual release.


2 comments:

  1. Rhonda, you underestimate yourself. You are smarter than what you giver yourself credit for. =)

    Also, I really liked the first passage you used, "I want to argue...bare skin I am covering." It is easy to see a child stomping their foot in protest, but realizing they will not get their way.

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    1. Thanks for the comments. I am hard on myself. I am not a quitter and I love being part of the English class. getting to see the world through younger eyes is awesome.

      I love your comment you gave me about the passage I wrote. I felt she was in conflict with herself. Someone said Wednesday in class that she wasin conflict between her 2 worlds. I think it would be hard to live in 2 worlds.

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