Write about something well done. What did you learn from this group? What part of the Presentation seemed the best?
Is there constructive criticism that would help this group? What might have been more clear? What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished?
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Since you two were the first group to go, there had to be pressure, but both of you did a fantastic job of speaking in front of the class. One thing that was new to me was when FDR became ill with Polio. I figured he had had the disease since childhood.
ReplyDeleteOverall, the presentation was great! A lot of good information, and the slides were very easy to read.
Thanks Holly, I too learned a lot in doing this presentation and research. I remember as a little girl just always knowing this organization and important one.. I try to help them out when I can.. thanks for the wonderful review. Rhonda
DeleteYou did really good for being the first people up. I coud tell that you guys practiced and was very orgnized with the slides. One thing that I learned is the March of Dimes helpes alot of birth defects. You guys did very well with the speaking and the slides.
ReplyDeleteYou did very well at interacting with each other. It was a well thought out presentation and I liked how you gave FDR as an example of the polio. It was very significant that he had contracted the disease. I've learned a little about polio in one of my other classes and this enhanced my understanding. The information about the march of dimes is new to me, and I loved the presentation.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the great review, Yours was great too. I will be commenting...glad you learned some new things,
DeleteThanks so much for all the feedback and the comments...Everyone did a Great Job...
Deleteyou guys raised the bar for everyone else. you went into detail you told us about what the march of dimes was all about back then and what it does now. you even told us about FDR having polio and being a supporter. good job.
ReplyDeleteThanks David,Gosh going first was so scary.. I was feeling so sick...Thanks again...
DeleteYou had a very well organized presentation and it contained a lot of facts. The presentation was presented in a very believable and informational way. I thought it was important about what the March of Dimes does today.
ReplyDeleteThanks Andi, I learned a lot too...
ReplyDeleteYou guys did a great job, you where very organized, knew a lot of information, and interacted with each other very well. Your power point was very well done also!
ReplyDeleteYou both gave a very informational presentation however, I feel that Devon did more talking than Rhonda. Devon, you have a very good speaking voice and could probably make the most boring subject seem very interesting. I didn't know that much about The March of Dimes, but your presentation taught me a lot. You probably could have left a lot of the text that you had on the powerpoint off and it would have still been effective. Good job though.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your presentation a lot. I could tell you knew your information front to back. It was very nicely organized and you both did well.
ReplyDeleteYou guys were extremely knowledgeable on the March of Dimes, even the questions that were asked at the end you were able to give the answers without any problems. This may seem like a weird suggestion, but maybe try to anticipate some of those questions and have them answered in the presentation. Also, you should have someone proofread your slides before giving the presentation. I am here to help and would be happy to help anyone with that! This would give you an opportunity to receive suggestions on the layout of your slides, any spelling errors, and if you give your entire presentation, you can ask you test audience for any questions and have the information already in the presentation before giving it in class. Bravo to your braveness for going first, you guys were very well educated and I enjoyed the presentation!
ReplyDeleteinteresting, but you never went over what polio was, e.g virus bacteria ext. overall pretty good though
ReplyDeletevery well organized. seemed prepared,and good interactions with class. I learned alot.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your presentation! Devon is such a great speaker. you guys worked well together, and made the presentation interesting, good job!
ReplyDeleteGood presentation! you guys seemed very passionate on this and knew alot about the organization and how it previously benifited people.
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